Ticket #2407: text-updates.patch

trunk/BOOK/chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml

@@ -45 +45 @@
 
     <para>GCC now requires the GMP and MPFR packages. As these packages may
     not be included in your host distribution, they will be built with
-    GCC.</para>
+    GCC:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">tar -jxf ../mpfr-&mpfr-version;.tar.bz2
 mv mpfr-&mpfr-version; mpfr

trunk/BOOK/chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml

@@ -115 +115 @@
     changes to the original files in case the command is inadvertently run twice.
     </para>
 
-    <para>On x86_64, unsetting the multlib spec for GCC ensures that it
+    <para>On x86_64, unsetting the multilib spec for GCC ensures that it
     won't attempt to link against libraries on the host:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">case $(uname -m) in

trunk/BOOK/chapter05/e2fsprogs.xml

@@ -61 +61 @@
 <screen><userinput remap="install">make install-libs</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>Make the installed static libraries writable so debugging symbols can 
-    be removed later.</para>
+    be removed later:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="install">chmod -v u+w \
     /tools/lib/{libblkid,libcom_err,libe2p,libext2fs,libss,libuuid}.a</userinput></screen>

trunk/BOOK/chapter05/binutils-pass1.xml

@@ -77 +77 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>Because the machine description in the <envar>LFS_TGT</envar>
           variable is slightly different than the value returned by the
-          config.guess script, this switch will tell the configure script to
+          <command>config.guess</command> script, this switch will tell the
+          <command>configure</command> script to
           adjust Binutil's build system for building a cross linker.
           </para>
         </listitem>

trunk/BOOK/chapter06/e2fsprogs.xml

@@ -25 +25 @@
 
     <para>The E2fsprogs package contains the utilities for handling the
     <systemitem class="filesystem">ext2</systemitem> file system. It also
-    supports the <systemitem class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem> journaling
-    file system.</para>
+    supports the <systemitem class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem> and
+    <systemitem class="filesystem">ext4</systemitem> journaling
+    file systems.</para>
 
     <segmentedlist>
       <segtitle>&buildtime;</segtitle>